So this is the story im writing and if it works out, it might turn into a book. The following will be a list of characters im creating and the intro/back story leading up to the current time of the story. Im also asking if someone could grammar check this and possibly tell me how i can improve the opening. So here you go....
CHARACTERS
Sato
Age: 17
hair: brown, medium, little spiked
Eyes: brown
Height: 5'8"
Body type: Average
Info: "Calm and patient, true friend, does have a dangerous side though. He is a novice swordsman in the village Keriso."
Keara
Age: 18
hair: light brown, long